From the feedback I got from the first and second drafts, I reduced the number of sell lines and just included the artists that could be found in the magazine. This means that the reader could see what artists where in the magazine and see whether they would want to read it or not, thus making it easier to decide whether to buy the magazine or not.
The feedback I received for my contents page told me that I needed to add more images to the contents page and therefore took some previous images from other drafts and some new images to include in the contents page, making it a more appealing page to the reader.
The feedback for my double page spread told me that I needed to extend my article, which I then did, and included more questions within the interview. I also added a byline and a note to say who the image was taken by.
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